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15th August 1947

Midnight August 15 th 1947 we got freedom,Freedom fought with many a lives laid below the ground so the flag of our nation can fly high  yet have we achived the real freedom

                                   Tis nation i live to be free
                                   Proud an indian to be
                                   Yet freedom to me
                                   Never attained when chains of corruption bound thee

                                  Freedom lost in bribes paid
                                  Freedom lost when a child works
                                  Freedom lost when innocent hurt
                                  Freedom lost when a womens modesty violated

                                  Time to wake time to wake
                                  Values of life doth freedom take
                                  Rest not thy soul rest not thy soul
                                  To corruption thy heart to cry foul
                                  Freedom from war
                                  Freedom from hunger
                                  Freedom from poverty
                                  Freedom from corruption
                                 we hoist our flag
                                 we give sweets
                                 is it for the freedom we have got
                                 or for the freedom yet to gain
                                 A thought for Inependence day



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4 thoughts on “15th August 1947

  1. Hi PetyHow true..this is applicable to SL toocha

    Posted by charming | August 14, 2009, 3:23 pm
  2. we are still bound by strong ropes……..in the name of corruption povety hunger etc………….a long way to go still

    Posted by Julie | August 17, 2009, 8:37 am
  3. Land of the Free By Corey Threet Land of the Free home of the braveLand of disease home of the slaveFreedom of religion Freedom of speechFreedom of press and freedom to breachFreedom to steal freedom to takeFreedom to carry guns and Freedom to break The laws of the man and the laws of the wordFreedom from peace but to still use the birdThe only home of brave and Land of the FreeThe land who rules based off democracyFreedom to starve and Freedom to be poorFreedom to break and enter someone’s doorFreedom to lay off workers and close off jobsFreedom to take what they want and to robFreedom of abortion Freedom of extortion Freedom to own land and give everyone their portionFreedom for action by any means necessary But what their picture of that can really be scaryFreedom to wage war without our consent for our hours to be spent Freedom to take our money then make us pay rentThe poem was written abt America But i think we can use it everywhere.I love ur poems Pety.always a treath to read.Ur buddy

    Posted by sweeti's | August 18, 2009, 12:00 am
  4. ur profile pic …watch carefulywhat do u see??ur dad also with an umbrellawe want to reach an island….in the middle of the ocean.breathing fresh air…no worries.. peaceur butt

    Posted by sweeti's | August 23, 2009, 10:59 pm

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